呼呼呼，我又來了，這個六弦之首果然夠兇猛，怎麼翻都不順，終於，
在看了fish大的譯文幾次之後，有了想法，寫出來讓大家鞭。

原文是
倚箏天波觀浩淼 蒼音掀濤洗星辰
白虹貫日掃魔蕩 明玥當空照古今


譯文是

倚箏天波觀浩淼
Stand in the night,
Gu-jing by my side,

I set my eye
watching the sky

What a splendid night
maginificent in all side(beyond my mind).

蒼音掀濤洗星辰
Melody in the rise
Reach out to the sky.

Like waves in the tide
wash stars right and bright


白虹貫日掃魔蕩
Flaring light
beam through the sky

All alone to the right
into evil's eye.

Dispel them with my blade bright
like the sun in the shine


明玥當空照古今
My blade goes high,
cast light,
Never in the time
dim its light
Like the moon in the sky
forever shine.


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