邊吃鹹酥雞邊啃出來的譯作
挑戰今日玄宗六弦最兇最正　請各位同好鞭小力點
不過怎麼自己覺得讀起來像「一閃一閃亮晶晶」之類的小蘿莉兒歌？

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蒼
倚箏天波觀浩渺，蒼音掀濤洗星辰；
白虹貫日掃魔蕩，明玥當空照古今。

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Chhong/ Cang

Against the Gu-jheng can I see the vast cloud as open sea.
My melody whips great tide, clearing the stars back to bright.
Pulling out the flaring blade, I shall clear evils away,
My pearl-like sword shines high, lasting long in its light.

* Gu-jheng, an ancient instrument of China that resembles zither.

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我不太會說明自己譯詩的規則　所以乾脆抄書比較快XD

許淵仲：譯詩三美─意美、音美、形美
        手段三化─深化、等化、淺化

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