The Longest and Most Suffering Night
「最長的一夜」試譯(闍城血印Ep.21)


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夜深、暮沉，雙鋒冰冷孤寒；劍君、武者，心念獨守一字。
Deep in the dusk night, only two frosty blades shine.
Likewise, only one idea is in Kiam-gun’s mind.

回答我，劍是什麼？
Answer me. What is SWORD?

且慢！以劍君之實力，稽咸與虎帥聯手，勝算九成，無須你我出手
，自墜身分。
Wait! If Ki-Hen and Ho-Shuwai cooperate, the probability of
defeat Kiam-gun is ninety percent. He is not worthy of us
to cope with.

啊！
Eh…

吼！
(Roaring)

飄忽身影，迷離意志，盡展一生所學，是純粹劍的意念，劍的執著
。
He blurs, while his mind misted over. He shows everything
learning in the life, for he just keeps “SWORD” in the
mind.

四時江雨！
"Rain of the four seasons!"

千狩昂魄！
"Hunt, and cheer the will!"

好！五行劍陣！
Good. "Swords’ Formation with the Five Elements!"

五劍齊出，亂舞旋動急馳電風；聲威赫赫千里，變化靈動無端，虎
帥與稽咸先後負傷。
All the blades are launched. They fly, spin, and shift
artfully. Under such a mighty attack, Ki-Hen and Ho-Shuwai
 are hurt.

危險！
Watch out!

褎權襄助一掌，卻身陷劍陣之中。劍君以一敵三，落入劣勢，但是
…
Hiu-Kuan helps the two accompanies, yet this involves him
 into Kiam-gun’s attack. On the contrary, though defending
 the three jeopardizes Kiam-gun, he starts another attack.

八風劍式！
"Swords as the eight winds!"

啊！
Ah!

不過數招，劍君劍法又更上一層樓，怎會這樣？
He has gotten another progress within few rounds. How could
 it be?

劍武！
"Swords’ power!"

身影一動，最強執首出招了。
Meanwhile, the greatest commander has moved.

破軍令！ 掃！
“Order from the Disaster.” Spread!

啊…
Ah!

噁噗！
Eh…Ah!

你是一名勇者，走吧。
You are a brave warrior. Off you go.

你們還沒回答我，劍是什麼？五口劍，那一口才是最強之劍？是無
玹？是巽風？那一口是劍君所要的劍？
You haven’t answered me what SWORD is. Which blade here is
 the mightiest one? May it be “Adorn Not”? Or is it
“Wind”? Answer me! Which one will I use?

小心！用邪月之陣。
Be careful! Organize “The Evil-Moon”.

洺雙，邪月之陣是邪帝為對抗武癡一脈所創，數百年來不曾一用，
有必要對這小子使用嗎？
Bin-siang, “The Evil Moon” is a war formation designed by
 the Demon Emperor in hundreds of years before, aiming to
against “Wu-fan” disciples. We have never used it so far,
 and shall this boy deserve it?

他的劍法不斷提升，再拖下去，只怕幽皇親臨，也非他的敵手。
He upgrades on and on. If this continues, I’m afraid even
 Monarch Yo can not beat him.

來，用你們的身體告知我，劍是什麼？
Go ahead. Tell me by your body. What is SWORD?

邪月之陣！
The Evil Moon!

劍，無！
“Without swords!”

無的境界、劍之無。邪月映照，亂捲風雲，山河變色。光影與劍影
之中，劍，斷折，人，重傷。
“Without” indicates disappearance of swords. The evil
moon meets a turbulent wind, which shakes the land. In the
 center of lights, shadows, and blades, the swords are
split with their owner seriously wounded.

把握機會，稽咸逼命一瞬。
Ki-Hen moves at the very moment, intending to killing.

喝！
Eh!

怎…怎會這樣？
Why? How could it be?

劍，無處不在！
Swords are everywhere.

啊啊啊啊啊！
Ah--------------

再來！
Come again.

掙扎生死邊緣，劍君劍意再度昇華，肅殺之氣充斥天地之間。
Despite being on the edge of life and death, Kiam-gun
upgrades his understanding to SWORD again. Clouds of death
float above them.

看到了嗎？這也是我的劍！
See? This can be my sword, too.

恐懼。身經百戰，面臨眾多強敵，從不變色的兩大執首，生平第一
次感覺到真正的恐懼。眼前此人，赫然便是劍的化身、劍的意志。
Fear. Given that experienced numerous wars, the two
courageous commanders are afraid now. This swordsman seems
to be exactly a sword.

回答我，什麼是劍？
Answer me. What is SWORD?

嗯…這個人…
Er…This guy…

還在等什麼？殺啊！
What are you waiting for? KILL HIM!

不可！
Stop.

噁啊啊。
Ah! Ah! Ouch!

殺意爆發，血劍化做萬千利刃四周擴散，九幽出手化解。
Kiam-gun’s fingers are like swords, taking more lives
away. Blood sprays like numerous blades, and Nine Yo can
not but defend it personally.

九幽邪煌。
“Nine Yo’s flaming evil power!”


絕招過後，又是一片平靜，只有血液滴落塵埃的聲響
After Kiam-gun sprang his unique move, peace returns. The
 only sound is sounded by the dropping blood.

劍君十二恨，你還有多少血可流？
Kiam-gun, “ the Twelve Hatreds”. How long can you hold
on?

哈哈哈哈哈哈！
Hahahahaha.

護住幽皇。
Protect Monarch Yo.

我知道了。什麼是劍？接我最後一招！
Finally, I know. What is SWORD? This final sword shall be
 my answer.

小心，他的劍意又再度提昇了。
Be careful. He has gotten another progress on the
understanding.

十二恨天下無敵！
The twelfth hatred: Being invincible in the world!

最後的領悟，最簡單的一招，也是劍君最後一滴鮮血。
The final understanding brings the simplest attack, yet
this is Kiam-gun’s final drop of blood.

眾人避開！
Avoid him!

至絕的一招，無可抵擋的劍意，震懾在場眾人。急促的呼吸聲中，
風，停了
It’s the most fatal attack, for the SWORD at present is
overwhelming. Every one is astonished, being out of
breathing. Before long; however, the wind fades…

我不知道什麼是劍，但我知道你是真正的劍客。
I can’t understand your way of sword, but surely you are
a true swordsman.

將你的手拿開！
Take your dirty hands away!

一身飄零，十二恨消，畢生追求劍之至理的劍君，當捨去一切，付
出全部心力與性命，換回最後的領悟，最後的一劍，是否真是天下
無敵，是否是劍君一生願望的終點？
Being unsettled through the life, “the Twelve Hatreds”
 passes away. As a pursuer of fencing, Kiam-gun gave up
everything only to rescue the final understanding. Is this
 final sword really invincible in the world? Is it the end
 to Kiam-gun’s lifelong realization? No one knows, but
this needs no answer, either.


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※ 編輯: fish740729      來自: 218.172.158.12       (07/30 22:48)
推 a98674:<(￣ㄧ￣ ) 大推英文啊！（雖然有看沒有懂XD）              07/30 22:47
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推 cgk007:推!  Leave now!有命令的口氣 Off you go! 會不會適情一點?  07/30 22:52
推 donod:我覺得劍是什麼很難翻，因為它不只是指劍物體本身，還有更抽  07/30 22:52
→ donod:像的意義，想不到好字，辛苦了                              07/30 22:53
→ fish740729:感謝cgk007.的確Off you go的口氣會比較緩和.馬上改！   07/30 22:55
※ 編輯: fish740729      來自: 218.172.158.12       (07/30 22:56)
→ fish740729:感謝donod的批評.我目前只能用大寫來強調他的言外之意.  07/30 22:59
→ donod:It is not worthwhile that we fight him together，你我無   07/30 23:00
→ donod:須出手，這樣寫會不會好一點                                07/30 23:00
→ fish740729:如果您想到比較貼切的字,還請不吝告知,謝謝.            07/30 23:00
→ fish740729:這個我要想一下...worthy是我很沒有語感的一個字.       07/30 23:02
推 loveyourself:劍君的部份以前聖石傳說的英文網頁有一些             07/30 23:04
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→ fish740729:感謝donod.我覺得我的選字比你好,但你的文法是對的.     07/30 23:06
→ fish740729:您的譯法意義偏重於"值得花精力和時間去對付"           07/30 23:07